Eiyuu Kishi Den

I've started re-writing our RP as a fan fiction (of sorts). Aside from re-writing our RPs, I'm also including flashback chapters which will expand on the character's backstory with Kiran (most of which will have sexual content, as that is his main offense).

Feel free to give me reviews and advice in this thread.

Prologue: Nehen's Story
Chapter 1: Leaving Home
Chapter 2: Sythenra's Story
Chapter 3: The Dark Forest